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Critique by Ashinson Sep 2, 2011, 9:01:20 PM
in X amount of words - we've come to a plethora to discuss....

Composition elements: The slender triangular blades of green grasses and clusters of curved violet blossoms set a base of distinct geometric shapes and colors that occur naturally. Our model, here dons a similarly varied yet contrasting blouse and armlet. The fabric pattern in terms of variety is in apposition to the grass while at the same time the nature of it's content is a dichotomy having sculls, snakes swirls and stark forms contrary to the living beauty of the grass. Her two toned hair in matted, spiked coif also parallels the grass in form yet contrasts in color and direction, pointing downward toward. In the center we can find a band of smooth white skin which appears without blemish and stands out from amidst such patterning and variety. Her pose and camera angle works well in terms of defining a concise rounded head, face, oblong arms with matching curved body. These shapes are more consistent for her, creating a visual language for her as the subject and are in contrast to the pointed shapes of the grass and hair.

Theme: Apposition / Opposition

Technique: I cant answer that, I know nothing of the craft apart from point and shoot

Overall impression: a nicely balanced image. It may lack if anything a clearer focusing element.

I always enjoy looking at :iconh0ll0w25:'s stuff - there is some reaching to try something different than necessarily within the "sweet spot". Thank you for requesting - always a pleasure
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Vonreid Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
For some reason my eyes end up drifting from the plant life, to pigeon, and then to the skull on her sleeve and back again....and then it just cycles.... it's a good picture...and I really can't put my finger on why.
Bravo man.
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FanArtistik Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
Great work with the session, looks wonderful. Thanks for share. :)
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Kiayi Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011
very expresive, almost dont believe this is taken with coolpix
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thanks ...and coolpix is just the sub-brand it aint no point and click..lol...there`s quite a few sophisticated cameras under that brand ...so its not that hard to believe.....
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Kiayi Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011
hi, can this camera used with strobist? i plan to buy this one
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Kiayi Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011
very expressive
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spazzi13 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011
This is a great photo--what I would love to see it everything the same, except with her eyes visible--Especially if they are blue or green, or bright in general. I think that would be add a whole new level to the photo, and be a nice focus point.
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
but her eyes aren't blue or green they're dark brown(still lovely) but the focus wasn't to be her eyes....thanks though
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PJarrett Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
Awkward pose. Your hand, with light shining between your fingers, cupped behind that rectangular earring and your bracelet and necklace...all the metal in the picture...comes together. My eyes went there first and I got a slight jar. It seemed, in the middle of all this green and the fabulous top and your succulent flesh, there was a jangle of razor blades that made me cringe and become aroused at the same time.
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
keen eye.....I like...thanks a ton
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PJarrett Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011
I'm a literate type, but I hate to read online stuff so I spend my time grazing in the field of dreams.
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thisinfinitelie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks a lot like someone I know o.O Anywho, very good photograph :3
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
thx and that would be awesome ...we should get em together for some "separated at birth" type ish..lol...anyway thanks again
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thisinfinitelie Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aha, that would be really cool :3
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BLACKSTAR-SHABACH Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
killer comp, use of color, eye flow...awesome joint, as usual
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
thanks bro....I appreciate ...glad u liked
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011
Mmm, words pertaining to what could very well be a bad situation...
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
hahahaha....you have a point...lol
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KitFox17 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lovin' the whole thing. especially the color contrast. excellant job ^_^
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
thanks so much...
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KitFox17 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very welcome :hug:
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77Kura Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
love the look and hair
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2011  Professional General Artist
thanks I appreciate it
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Captain-BlackHeart Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
what a fantastic photo.....great shot, colors........perfect
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H0LL0W25 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Professional General Artist
word....thx a lot man....
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